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Virgin Eyes by =innocencedied2nite:iconinnocencedied2nite:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Philosophical > Fixed


Virgin eyes that see no pain
Virgin eyes that know no strain
Virgin eyes bright with the rain
Virgin eyes with nothing to gain

How I wish to see them smile
Bright blue, ice blue, seem not vile
Filled with laughter, not with tears.
Filled with life, not with fears.

Dreams still glisten with a glow
Hopes still held in hearts now slow
Faith still put in things you know
Love still has an ebb and flow

Virgin eyes in blindness see
Virgin eyes pays us a fee
Virgin eyes sets us free
Virgin eyes belong to me
©2008 =innocencedied2nite
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Sparked by a poetry war between :iconthisita: and myself. We have been at it for days, mucking up poor :iconcletusjackson: 's journal... lol.. glad he seems to tolerate us.
Anyway, particularlly liked this one... what do you think?
Yes, as always, it means something very dear to me... so please be kind.
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*MindOfGenius:iconMindOfGenius: May 14, 2008, 12:13:02 AM Mood: Amazed
beautiful. just beautiful. So beautiful, I wont tarnish it with a comment. Awesome.

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Dare you to unlock the secrets of my mind...

Genius is in the details...and I'm going to live up to that!
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OBJECTION! I defy your logic, and everything it stands for!!!
=innocencedied2nite:iconinnocencedied2nite: May 14, 2008, 12:24:29 AM
I don't know how to reply to that... Thanks so much for making my night with your comment. :blushes:

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Eyes are in the Beauty of the Beholder :crazy:
:rose::butterflytwo:

Aang:"You're insane, aren't you?"
Old Woman: "Thaaaat's Right!"
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I'm a member of *AngstyWriters
My Club *Project-Be-Bold Dare to be heard!
*MindOfGenius:iconMindOfGenius: May 14, 2008, 12:28:18 AM
im bowing to the aewsome-ness of this work. Again, putting me to shame...MUST WORK HARDER!!! The hard part about my series is that I don't want to opening to suck, sos I'm trying to make it as aesome as possible. WHICH IS TAKING A WHILES!!!

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Dare you to unlock the secrets of my mind...

Genius is in the details...and I'm going to live up to that!
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OBJECTION! I defy your logic, and everything it stands for!!!
*Lumaris:iconLumaris: May 14, 2008, 1:25:20 AM
Amazing.... It really brings visuals of children (to me, I suppose I see little kids as described...so innocent and their eyes foreign and alien to anything terrible or sad.) I love this - it's beautiful and really meaningful. :heart:

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-Live where Magic embraces the Heart.-
~Thundering Magic Contest~
=innocencedied2nite:iconinnocencedied2nite: May 14, 2008, 1:31:28 AM
:hug: Thank you .... And yes I was thinking of children, mine specifically, when I wrote this. I'm actually somewhat proud of this piece, for some reason. I am so glad you like it too. :D

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Eyes are in the Beauty of the Beholder :crazy:
:rose::butterflytwo:

Aang:"You're insane, aren't you?"
Old Woman: "Thaaaat's Right!"
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
I'm a member of *AngstyWriters
My Club *Project-Be-Bold Dare to be heard!
=innocencedied2nite:iconinnocencedied2nite: May 14, 2008, 1:33:13 AM
:glomp: Thank you so much, again. Just take your time, it will be awesome when it's posted!

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Eyes are in the Beauty of the Beholder :crazy:
:rose::butterflytwo:

Aang:"You're insane, aren't you?"
Old Woman: "Thaaaat's Right!"
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
I'm a member of *AngstyWriters
My Club *Project-Be-Bold Dare to be heard!
*OrdinaryKronos:iconOrdinaryKronos: May 14, 2008, 5:43:37 AM
Beautiful...Sumple, but beautiful. ^^

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God Defend New Zealand

E Ihoa, Atua,
O nga Iwi! Matoura.
Ata whaka rongona;
Me aroha noa.
Kia hua ko te pai;
Kia tau to atawhai;
Manaakitia mai
Aotearoa.
*Lumaris:iconLumaris: May 14, 2008, 5:51:05 AM
You're welcome :hug: you should be proud - it's amazing. :)

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-Live where Magic embraces the Heart.-
~Thundering Magic Contest~
=innocencedied2nite:iconinnocencedied2nite: May 14, 2008, 12:10:10 PM
:hug: thank you so much!

--
Eyes are in the Beauty of the Beholder :crazy:
:rose::butterflytwo:

Aang:"You're insane, aren't you?"
Old Woman: "Thaaaat's Right!"
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
I'm a member of *AngstyWriters
My Club *Project-Be-Bold Dare to be heard!
~tapeking:icontapeking: May 14, 2008, 1:35:32 PM
Beautiful. Just beautiful. I haven't read nor wrote a poem this good.

Innocence... is something I respect and wish to protect in others. This poem reminded me of that. It also made me think of some of the people in my life. It's wonderful.

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Want some fresh-baked π? It's good!
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