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Please note that this story does contain mild homosexual tones. Nothing graphic, but if you feel uncomfortable about reading such subjects, please turn around now and head the other way. I will not except flames, insults or damns- with-faint- praise of any kind. Thank you.
This was written as a gift for the darling *StephethxLoser whom I adore. We had a conversation once that if she wrote something hetro relationship wise, I would try my hand at something not. This piece bloomed from that, and has taken me months to complete. Honestly, I really like it, for the emotional aspect. I hope if comes across as touching. Enjoy, those who read.
I am open for critiques. But all the warnings apply to that as well.. no flames, no insults. I'm not forcing you to read my work after all.
Photo for lit tag by me.
This was written as a gift for the darling *StephethxLoser whom I adore. We had a conversation once that if she wrote something hetro relationship wise, I would try my hand at something not. This piece bloomed from that, and has taken me months to complete. Honestly, I really like it, for the emotional aspect. I hope if comes across as touching. Enjoy, those who read.
I am open for critiques. But all the warnings apply to that as well.. no flames, no insults. I'm not forcing you to read my work after all.
Photo for lit tag by me.
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Overall
Vision Originality Technique ImpactI really liked this story. It is a bit depressing and exists in a sort of a dream world. I suppose, the main character is a dreamer and we see the happenings through his eyes. His personality is well defined, although I know nothing about his name or appearance. I know none of those things about the professor either, which leaves some blanks in the overall well defined picture.
I was surprised at the vomiting scene and the conversation. It happened way fast and seemed as if the student boy had recognized the illness too fast and was accepting this way too calmly. I'd expect the first reaction to be 'food poisoning', not 'how long have you known'.
The story is touching for sure, I only wish it was longer.