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"Don't go," he pleaded, his voice etched with the pain of his heart. His hand shot out to grab at hers, but she calmly stepped out of his reach. With an icy look she shook her head.

"Give me one reason to stay."

"I love you," he whispered, hoping it was what she wanted to hear. Her lips formed the only smile that could make him wince.

"I know you do," she replied, looking down at the ring on her finger.

"It's not enough, is it?" he asked, already knowing her answer.

She shook her head once again, this time slowly, and with an air of sadness. "No, it's not. I love you too, but I can't trust you. And that means more to me than anything." Her fingers caressed the ring, remembering the day he gave it to her. She thought forever was within their grasp. Now, looking at the broken man before her, her eyes filled with tears.  She touched his cheek briefly.

"Please..." he said, "Don't go. I'm nothing without you."

She brushed her lips across his cheek. "I'll be nothing if I stay." With one last look over her shoulder, she dropped the ring on the table and tried to smile once more. Silently, she opened the door, leaving the life she had known behind. As the door closed, the tears slid down her cheeks.

"If only my staying wouldn't hurt more than leaving does."

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Written as my daily drabble for *dailyLab A new group established by `elicoronel16 and I as a place where everyone can do some sort of art work daily. Come check us out!

Yes.. it has no real plot. I've been blocked for a while now (I blame NaNo) and this was just a random ramble to break some of the block up.

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:iconsquallxzell-leonhart:
Wow...that's all I can say...
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:icondani-the-naiad:
~Dani-the-Naiad Jan 13, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
great moment
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:iconbahama-dreams:
It's a complete story in itself yet also reads like a teaser for a much larger story.
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:icontox2wallz:
very good, very sad.
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:iconstoryofmylife054:
this came out beautifully!
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:iconsevehn:
tragic but an awesome clear writeup!
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:iconinnocencedied2nite:
Thank you.
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:icontam2u:
This is great thank you for sharing. Good luck with the block and may have to come check out the group
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:iconinnocencedied2nite:
Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it.

And yes, please do check out the group. I think it will be fun for everyone.
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:iconelicoronel16:
Mood: dA Love `elicoronel16 Jan 2, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Aww, it's heartbreaking, i loved it and it kind of made me want to know more about the backstory :heart:

I'll talk to you tomorrow so we can start posting prompts in the group, maybe that'll break the block a bit :love:
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