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Love is a multicolored thing
filled with black and blue and shades of gray
It knocks us down when we feel tall
Rips out our hearts, feels nothing at all

Love keeps us going forever strong
Always tells us when we're wrong
To heights above makes our hearts soar
Stabs with pain like never before

Love promises to heal our soul
Return our hearts-black as coal
It keeps us warm like the sun
Kills us quietly with a gun

Love cannot be trusted, its never there
It's a house for sale. with the sign "Beware"
Traps us in a web of lies
Muffles our scream, stifles our cries

Love is a child sweet smile of hope
The only thing that helps me cope
For only in their smile I see
The world I want for you and me.
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`dreamsinstatic Sep 18, 2008  Professional Writer
I love the imagery of this and how love is presented in a series of thoughts and pictures in which you never hear it related.
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:iconinnocencedied2nite:
:D Thank you so much. Yes, I don't like love poems, and have a hard time writing romantic love poems. So I wrote about the love that is far deeper and longer lasting, at least to me. I am so glad you like it.
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Mood: Happy ~JaM-FaiRY Aug 23, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
This is one of my favourites and really does give a written picture to what I think of love
lovely

xo :hug:
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:iconinnocencedied2nite:
Thank you so much. A comment like that means a lot to me.
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~JaM-FaiRY Aug 24, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
aww it was a pleasure hun! :hug: Sorry I couldn't finish listening to the rest of your reading :(
I really liked it a lot - your kids must love it when you read them bedtime stories..you have a really good reading voice

xo
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:iconinnocencedied2nite:
It's ok. It was very nice to have you there for any length of time :hug:
I think they do..
And thanks. I think I sound like a little kid...
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~JaM-FaiRY Aug 28, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
No you dont sound like a kid! But you dont sound like a old person - I mean you sound like someone thats not intimidating and that we can relate to - u sound sweet!
:hug:
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:iconinnocencedied2nite:
:phew: that is a relief to hear you think so. You are very sweet, thanks!
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~JaM-FaiRY Aug 30, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
:hug:
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That brought tears to my eyes. That's so beautiful.
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